1:45:00 AM MST
Christmas Haiku, Part One: At the Mall
I think I wrote these last year [2003].
Christmas shopping goesFrom brain-wracking to frenzy--
Is it over yet?
Out in the mall lot
There arose such a clatter:
Presents crashed to ground!
Buying Toys for Tots
Is our yearly tradition.
Got toys--no drop box!
The photo: rain in the Sears lot, Park Place, summer 2004. Photo by KFB.
Written by mavarin.
This entry has 2 comments:
Great `kus!!!
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Comment from deabvt - 12/9/04 9:19 AM
Hi :)
I wish I had some talent for Haiku...alas...
I love the photo. Great entry.
Always, Carly :)
Comment from ondinemonet - 12/9/04 5:17 AM
Saturday, December 11, 2004
2:10:00 AM MST
Christmas Haiku #2 Retro Christmas
The color wheel turns.
Changing hues sweep through the room--
With no tree in sight.
Annual question:
Real tree? White tree? Silver tree?
Can't we compromise?
Pine cones in spray paint:
Turquoise and pink--that's not right!
Retro Christmas time.
KFB 2003-2004
Written by mavarin.
This entry has 3 comments:
Love it!
:-)
~JerseyGirl
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Comment from cneinhorn - 12/12/04 8:20 PM
R E A L !!!!!
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Comment from deabvt - 12/12/04 3:22 AM
LOL Someone in my local Freecycle group was looking for a color wheel the other day. Do you have the aluminum tree? ;-) Merry Christmas, Charlie Brown!
Comment from ryanagi - 12/11/04 1:15 PM
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